It's all about my new life in this amazing place, amazing university. I will update it with my new experience here for the next 5 and a half months.
I feel like screaming "Hey dudes! I am a student of University of Wisconsin Eau Claire!!!"
Sunday, July 25, 2010
My Concrete Poem - I am Your Sun
The poem is about someone who promises the most precious person in her or his life that she/ he will always be there for the person no matter what happens.
I can really see Aventia as the author here. We write about things we are pre-occupied with. I can see in this poem that you are really looking for someone to love, care about and make the center of your universe.
Well, it is a bit small for us to read. But it looks really nice and the content that you describe seems to me to be inspiring and sweet.
ReplyDeleteI like the sun:)
ReplyDeleteSuch a cool image! Hope this makes it into our anthology!! Your blog looks great--keep it up next semester :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem!
ReplyDeleteI can really see Aventia as the author here. We write about things we are pre-occupied with. I can see in this poem that you are really looking for someone to love, care about and make the center of your universe.
Keep writing!